Monday, May 14, 2012

Freak


Author's Note- This is a poem I wrote as part of my goal for Language Arts (to write 2-3 poems [all different types] and a short fictional piece based off the same theme.  The theme I chose was judging someone by their cover.  Comments are appreciated!

See that girl…
Sitting all alone.

Hair unwashed,
Greasy,
Tangled.

Putrid breath,
Tired eyes.

She keeps her head down
As she roams the halls.

Freak, they call her.

Ugly
Little
Freak.

"What a mess," they say.
You go along with them.

"Does she own a brush
For her hair or teeth?"  they say.
You agree.

They 'accidentally' shove her at the lockers.
You laugh.

What they don't know
Is that she gets enough of that at home.

See that bruise on her wrist?

Klutz, you think.
She probably banged it on something, you think.

She got that from her father.
And the one on her stomach.
And the claw marks on her back.

He's the reason she wears long sleeves.


She reads a book at lunchtime.
She doesn't eat.

Anorexic nut job, you think.

But you don't know
That she's making sure
There's enough in the account
For her little brother to have lunch.

Teacher calls on her.
She doesn't know the answer.

Stupid, you think.

But you don't know
She's too busy worrying about
Where she'll get her next meal
To study.



They don’t know her.

You don't know her.

So why do you judge?
Why do you make fun?
Why do you think this is okay?

You don’t know
That she's a great person.
You don't bother to find out.

Because you see she's ugly
On the outside,

You assume she's the same
On the inside.

You treat her like dirt,
Like scum.

Because she's different.
Because of her appearance. 

But if you keep treating her that way,

Then she's a better person
Than you'll ever be.

1 comment:

  1. This is so touching. It's so sad, yet a realistic topic. The formatting and organization is great. I love the "i think" repition. The way you used that sends a powerful message with your strong, wise voice in it.

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